Revised Query

I sent my revised query over to the Public Query Slushpile. Take a look if you have a second.

Immortalis -Carpe Noctem

Comments

B.J. Anderson said…
You are so brave! I'll have to go read it and leave a comment. Oh, and your book trailer will be posted on my blog today! :D
Jessica said…
Looks pretty good to me. Smooth too. :-)
Tess said…
Brave, brave girl! I checked it out...sounds tantalizing :D
quixotic said…
Thanks guys. I've been working so hard to tweak and polish this. I've been through at least 20 different revisions on this Query alone. Ugh!

Glad to hear it sounds appealing.
Danyelle said…
Good luck! Queries are tough to write. :)
If you can write a compelling story, you can write a compelling query. It will come. At least, that's what I keep telling myself.
Strange Fiction said…
Good job! Peaked my interest in your story. I'll be waiting in line to pick it up when you are published.
Lazy Writer said…
I finally checked it out! It's great. You are so brave, as others before me have mentioned. It's hard to put your work out there. I give you credit!